For my character design "In Sequence" assignment I had this lenghty story about a gorilla trying to turn on a television but getting electrocuted, burned, etc. Enzo, my teacher, condensed it and changed it multiple times until it was only six panels long (originally 17) and with a slighlty different story.
Here are the rough versions of the assignment. Since I already handed in my clean-up versions, I was only able to scan the roughs. I kind of prefer the rough versions to the clean ones anyway though, so I don't really mind :)